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I don't know if anyone knew about my website, but here it is (CAUTION: those still using Internet Explorer will not enjoy the view as much.) FIREFOX is better. (Though there may be better ones still.)

http://www.bellezzamurals.com

Any tips/changes you suggest would be nice. Constructive criticism.

I'm trying to lure the rich baby boomers away from their wallets.

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On April 18th, 2007 11:16 pm (UTC), rockymento commented:
okay what about us not so rich baby boomers...holy cow girl...awesome
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On April 22nd, 2007 07:49 pm (UTC), betty25_boop replied:
The not - so - rich ones can be haggled with... I must stake my claim! But I'm willing to make exceptions. :)
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On April 22nd, 2007 08:28 pm (UTC), rockymento replied:
coincidence time!!!
The missionaries in our ward needed a ride to pick up an investigator today...started talking to the missionaries, one was from EDEN, Ut. His favorite Home Teaching partner had been YOUR DAD. small world...kids' name was carnahan...small small world...
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On April 19th, 2007 04:37 am (UTC), k3llya commented:
I like the basic look and images a lot...very elegant. I also love that head shot...your friend did a great job!

I do have a few suggestions for making your site look more polished, though.

1. I think it's important for you to find a way to keep your elements within the borders of the background at all times. On the "About Me" and "Gallery" pages, the text and graphics overlap on the right side unless I have my browser set pretty narrowly (even in Firefox). It's difficult to read your bio when the pink text goes over the white background.

2. In your bio, I think your bulleted list will look better if you use the ul tag. Here's how to do that: http://www.w3schools.com/tags/tag_ul.asp

3. I think your site will look better in a sans serif font like Arial or Helvetica.


Probably one of the best steps you can take will be to learn to use CSS. I'm just learning how to use it myself, but programs like Dreamweaver help...and it does have a 30-day trial version.

Let me know if you want to talk about this in person sometime.
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On April 19th, 2007 09:34 pm (UTC), warlordblade commented:
K3llya had some great comments, and very good ideas. Listen to what she said for sure!

The only glaring problem was on the about you page text for sure.

Very nice - and nice what you could accomplish with Stormpages, eh?
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